Tuesday, January 6

Hot Pocket Lips

His lips, 
like two Hot Pockets® 
on the plate of his face.

 Hot, cheesy, convenient goodness

But he is empty calories;
Distilled monoglycerides, corn syrup solids
Imitation, artificial. Over processed, barely edible. 

 He'll give you heart burn.
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11 comments:

  1. JCJanuary 6, 2015 at 2:39 PM

    Awesome. So glad you've joined the fray. I guess I should straighten up and join y'all. And never apologize for poetry. It is what it is. It stands on its own. I like it.

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    1. Disciplined_IdeaFebruary 22, 2015 at 6:26 PM

      http://jessklein.bandcamp.com/track/the-wading-pool

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  2. FreakyHowieJanuary 6, 2015 at 3:10 PM

    Nice!!!

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    1. Disciplined_IdeaFebruary 23, 2015 at 1:42 PM

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=trueview-instream&v=3er5JThGA_U

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  3. KathyJanuary 6, 2015 at 3:31 PM

    I like it too! Sometimes poetry needs to be funny!

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    1. Disciplined_IdeaFebruary 23, 2015 at 1:48 PM

      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zStB5nGwwlk&feature=related

      http://www.reddit.com/r/DebateAnAtheist/comments/2ih9xu/httpbooksgooglecombooksidvaiqaaaayaajotsw5xkmpbykt/

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C2khAbHqDbg

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  4. LuJanuary 6, 2015 at 8:50 PM

    Write more "terrible" poetry, please!

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  5. Terrible PoetryJanuary 24, 2015 at 12:33 AM

    Thank you all for your support!

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  6. Disciplined_IdeaFebruary 23, 2015 at 1:41 PM

    "Plauz":

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9PpJ3tqkCVM

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  7. Disciplined_IdeaFebruary 23, 2015 at 2:32 PM

    PrePosterous

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fccqaKTz3Ko&google_comment_id=z12rh5uyosrictvpd04cdzz4ttvfwf2xpng0k

    http://www.reddit.com/r/Christianity/comments/22co7k/may_i_pray_for_you_friend/ch7ofyc

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YEYxOPtQqWw

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