Thursday, January 8

Boat

I would trade you my boat for a life jacket.
A life jacket.
A life jacket.
I would trade you my boat for a life jacket.

This boat on the sea.
The boat with a hole.
A hole so the water rushes in.
Water rushes in from the sea.

A boat
on the sea
with a hole
where the water bubbles in.

I would trade you this boat,
This boat with the hole
I would trade you this boat,
and the hole
and the sea

Trade you this boat for a life jacket.

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4 comments:

  1. FreakyHowieJanuary 9, 2015 at 4:35 PM

    I don't think a lot of people can appreciate poetry. But if they could, they would appreciate your poetry. Because you have a poetic soul. And I appreciate it very much.

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    1. Terrible PoetryJanuary 10, 2015 at 6:03 PM

      Well thank you very much, I'm touched that you would say that!

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    2. Disciplined_IdeaApril 5, 2015 at 8:38 AM

      youtube.com/watch?feature=trueview-instream&v=vERpxpmI8tY

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  2. Disciplined_IdeaApril 5, 2015 at 8:11 AM

    youtube.com/watch?v=xGox2wVCLuw

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